Great work Cameron. You used the paragraph template very well. The next steps for you would be to analyse the shot/scenes without the template and to fine tune your exemplars; for example, describe in more detail the scene around PKs dad being killed; and the mid shot you described is actually a long shot. Fabulous work, though :)
Great work Cameron. You used the paragraph template very well. The next steps for you would be to analyse the shot/scenes without the template and to fine tune your exemplars; for example, describe in more detail the scene around PKs dad being killed; and the mid shot you described is actually a long shot. Fabulous work, though :)
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